The Gap

[Delta40]

I dream of you
virile Adonis
while my teeth
float in murky water
I gnash my gums
and endure
the gnawing ache
of life
without you
the gap in my life

[dafydd manton]

The pain and suffering of old age, and then the terrilbe loss. The biggest tragedy in life.

[Delta40]

((((hugs for Daffy))))

[Bar22do]

This is as poignant as it is well observed. This unimposing poem imposes great empathy... Sad and - masterful, amazing Delta.

[Jerrybaldy]

I thought it was fun!! Teeth in water, gnawing aches, made me smile. I'm Jerry. Im sick :)

[dafydd manton]

Nearly there, kid, nearly there!

[Jerrybaldy]

hmmm.

[Maryd.]

Dear Delta, this one made me frown... Not in a bad way, but almost certainly sad way



Nearly there, kid, nearly there!

Awww dear... Here...:grouphug:

[hack]

Delta, Another amazing slice.
Keep them coming...peace...