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Michealkirbyleo
08-31-2010, 08:45 PM
Hello! This is my first post here, so I thought I would write a book!!!

Tell me what you think:D


Dust Mindamain sat in a very expensive reclining chair, his long brown hair ruffled and his hands resting on the hilts of his daggers. A rather large maid entered the room and told him Guild Master Henry Burrows was ready to see him. Lazily getting up from the chair. He walked over to the door and she escorted him to the Guild Masters office. Thinking about how he'd here so many times before as he entered the room. Well it sure took long enough Dust growled at Henry who was siting at his desk. It piled high with papers. He was a strange man, he was 75 years old, had huge glasses, talked to much and had short blue gray hair. certainly not some one you would think would be running the assassins guild. Henry looked at him stroking his long beard.(WELL)?? ??( Why am I here)? Dust gowled, burning his always short fuse. Henry looked at him sighed and said (I have an assignment for you so don't go and blow it this time)!!
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Silvaiea Stormbreaker After a long day she flopped down on her bed. Thinking about how being the a doughtier of a commander could be a curse.
Her father having no interest in his 17 year old other then making sure she becoming a paladin. God Damn It!! she thought her life was boring!!
5 days a week she would get up at 6 in the morning take a lesson on academics then she would take a lesson in magic and finally some combat instructor would blast her brains out yelling at her to hold the Damn shield in a different way. (DAmn why was I born into the paladins guild) she moaned. The next morning she got up brushed her blond hair and got ready to start her day of torture. Then she remembered that today was her break day. She cheered clapping her hands, today she was going to have some fun.

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Dust ate his breakfast leisurely as he thought about his task, sneak into the nearby Paladins Guild get the documents and get out without a trace, Way easy he thought with a smirk. Then he paid his bill and wen't out of the caffe.

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As Silvaiea walked out of the guild building glad she had managed to get away from the body guards that followed her every ware. She was wearing a knee high blue skirt and a yellow shirt over it. "finally a day off" she thought to herself. she met up with her friend Maya and they went down to her favorite caffe for a late breakfast.
when they neared the doors Silvaiea spotted a boy walking out the door he was wearing long brown pants that flared out at the bottom, a black leather jacked and a belt that menacingly holstered 2 daggers. Also noticing his long brown hair before Maya broke her concentration. Ooo said Maya, nice grab Silv I was going to go talk to him, but I guess you saw him first so I won't winking at Silvaiea wile she said it. Shut up Silvaiea shouted as she blushed. (Any way) she though to herself, (who was that guy and why was she not able to take his eyes off him).


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Silvaiea walked into the near by bar to wait for the rest of there troop. Plopping down in a chair in the lounge. Thinking how Maya was going to kill herself one day from overdosing alcohol. Her eyes drifted over to a boy siting in a booth, thinking about something. Realizing it was the boy from before she averted her eyes. Silvaiea sighed, happy that Maya hadn't seen her. (How long is it going to take from my friends to get here), (I don't think I can take this any more) she thought.
Her eyes inching closer to the guy.


Dust got up from his seat passing the bar, A food shot out in front of him but he nimbly steeped over it. The man that had done the deed stood up beer dripping from his flabby face. Dust continued walking away but the red headed man grabbed him by the back of his jacket. Picking Dust off the ground and turning him towards his face. (Y-You punk) the man stuttered and threw a punch at captured opponent. A puff of smoke erupted in the mans hands stunning him, a millisecond later Dust appeared next to the drunk sweeping his feet under him. As he fell Dust extended his leg and kicked the man in the ribs.



Silvaiea watched in horror. The man on the ground pulled out a musket aiming it at The boy as he walked away. People hid behind tables, this was normal in here. The musket fired but the man had put to much firing powder in it earlier. Suddenly Silvaiea was standing in front of Maya someone whispered in her ear (Summon your shield now)! She did. A blast wave hit the shield pushing her back. Looking up from her shield she saw that the people hiding behind chairs had lived. Silvaiea sighed realizing that if she had stayed ware she was she would be toast. Then she froze how had she gotten over here and why WERE THERE HANDS ON HER SHOULDERS???


Woot chapter one finished!!!!!