in the harvest season

[angliholic]

When our love has become
overwhelmingly sweet,
even a word is too redundant.

Why not reap this apple memory
with tears and smiles
on our faces
in the harvest season?

[dafydd manton]

The love just oozes out of this one, Angli! I love that line "overwhelmingly sweet" You've done it again!

[Delta40]

very sweet - crunchy even!

[adityasam]

A very good poem. You don't know how to fail..... Do you? I liked the lines 4 and 5.....Cannot quote.....

Regards

[angliholic]

The love just oozes out of this one, Angli! I love that line "overwhelmingly sweet" You've done it again!
Thanks, dafydd, for the nice words.
Autumn is the season of romance and love, isn't it?


very sweet - crunchy even!

Thanks, Delta, for the sweet comment.
What is crunchy even? Apples or love?


A very good poem. You don't know how to fail..... Do you? I liked the lines 4 and 5.....Cannot quote.....

Regards

Thanks, Adi, for the good feedback!
What did you mean by "you don't know how to fail?"
Fail in love or scribbling?
I've been a loser and a failure in both and many other things!

[Jerrybaldy]

I agree with Delta. Does this mean you are branching out into fruit Ang ? ;)

[Bar22do]

You're a true cornucopia, Holic!

And your fine poem very much à propos, for, as the last harvest's gleanings come to a close, here comes Autumnus!

[drago]

When our love has become
overwhelmingly sweet,
even a word is too redundant.

Why not reap this apple memory
with tears and smiles
on our faces
in the harvest season?




I love this. I feel like you captured a feeling I never could or even consider attempting. Well-written and well-felt. Thank you.

[angliholic]

I agree with Delta. Does this mean you are branching out into fruit Ang ? ;)
Thanks, Jerry, for reading my scribbling and the question!
I'm trying to make something pretty without putting any flower in my scribbling!


You're a true cornucopia, Holic!

And your fine poem very much à propos, for, as the last harvest's gleanings come to a close, here comes Autumnus!
Thanks, Bar, for you opportunely comment!
It's autumn now, and I try to scribble something in season!


I love this. I feel like you captured a feeling I never could or even consider attempting. Well-written and well-felt. Thank you.

Thanks, Sarah, for the well-written comment!
In response to your appreciation, I'll think hard to scribble more of this kind of feeling!

[Jerrybaldy]

seasonal poetry, now that has to be eco friendly :)

[PrinceMyshkin]

"apple memory" is just wonderful!!! Thank you.

[angliholic]

seasonal poetry, now that has to be eco friendly :)

Thanks, Jerry, for the eco friendly feedback!
Do you suggest I should more eco friendly when scribbling?
I try hard not to harm our mother earth in everyday life, but I can't help it when scribbling!
But sorry! My melancholy is just too blue to be eco friendly!


"apple memory" is just wonderful!!! Thank you.

Thanks, Prince, for the wonderful feedback.

[Jerrybaldy]

I suggested in jest that your scribbling is eco friendly for using in season fruit. For your melancholy I would suggest giving your heart a rest and go and have some fun. Get laid get drunk do something ridiculous and then revisit your heart.

[tailor STATELY]

Beautiful, simply beautiful.

With admiration,
tailor STATELY

[angliholic]

I suggested in jest that your scribbling is eco friendly for using in season fruit. For your melancholy I would suggest giving your heart a rest and go and have some fun. Get laid get drunk do something ridiculous and then revisit your heart.

Thanks, Jerry, for the nice suggestion!
Since life hasn't been as satisfactory as we want it to be,
why not sail a boat with unkempt hair tomorrow morning?


Beautiful, simply beautiful.

With admiration,
tailor STATELY

Thanks, Tailor Stately, for the beautiful feedback.