FelixDay
08-30-2010, 11:51 PM
Hey guys. This is my first post here, sorry if it is in the wrong forum or if I am breaking any other rules. I am really looking for some feedback on the start of my latest short story (called case 78).
The basic story is a series of interview conducted by a agent of an unkown organisation concerning a event that happened in wyoming. It is the first time I have written anything in this sort of a style and would really love to know how I am doing. I am still quite a terrible writer, though I hear practice makes perfect, I just need to know what to practice, what I should be doing diffrent ect ect.
Anyway you can find the short story on my blog (latest entry):
http://www.felix-shortstories.blogspot.com/
it contains the first interview, hopefully to be updated with other interviews soon. Thank you very much =D
p.s Please ignore the other stories, they where done quite a while ago when I was just starting out, they are quite bad
p.s I know the grammar is terrible =(
The basic story is a series of interview conducted by a agent of an unkown organisation concerning a event that happened in wyoming. It is the first time I have written anything in this sort of a style and would really love to know how I am doing. I am still quite a terrible writer, though I hear practice makes perfect, I just need to know what to practice, what I should be doing diffrent ect ect.
Anyway you can find the short story on my blog (latest entry):
http://www.felix-shortstories.blogspot.com/
it contains the first interview, hopefully to be updated with other interviews soon. Thank you very much =D
p.s Please ignore the other stories, they where done quite a while ago when I was just starting out, they are quite bad
p.s I know the grammar is terrible =(