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Song of Mercy
08-30-2010, 02:04 AM
I see you peeking at me.
Don’t be afraid to cry
Little droplet of sky.
You sit quietly
On the window pane.
Heaving in, now full-
Ah, the sweet relief,
Running down beside the pane.

angliholic
08-30-2010, 02:16 AM
What a beautiful droplet!
Beautifully crafted!
And it's a sweet relief indeed!

Bar22do
08-30-2010, 04:06 AM
made me smile! thanks - Bar

Delta40
08-30-2010, 04:30 AM
oh I can hear the storm coming as you identify with this one drop! beautifully expressed

PrinceMyshkin
08-30-2010, 07:50 AM
So beautifully crafted, says so much in so few lines.

Song of Mercy
08-30-2010, 09:04 AM
Thanks Angeliholic, Bar, Delta and Prince.

hillwalker
08-30-2010, 10:09 AM
An elegant little poem - capturing one moment in time perfectly