Just give me a smile

[angliholic]

You don't have to give me a bouque of roses.
when I'm leaving.
They'll become a pile of remorse
when tomorrow comes.

Just give me a smile,
a spring breeze.
And I'll bury the treasure in my karma,
a trace in next reincarnation.

[Delta40]

you really love flowers don't you...

I don't but flowers aside, your writing is romantic, bright and very touching and i enjoy the glimpse of sunshine your poems give

[adityasam]

Wow, very nice. Very philosophical.

Regards

[angliholic]

you really love flowers don't you...

I don't but flowers aside, your writing is romantic, bright and very touching and i enjoy the glimpse of sunshine your poems give

Thanks, Delta, for the kind feedback!


Wow, very nice. Very philosophical.

Regards

Thanks, Adi, for your comment again!
Has the school started yet?

[dafydd manton]

How wistful - the flowers becoming remorse......I know the feeling. Thanks.

[PrinceMyshkin]

This


"And I'll bury the treasure in my karma"

is such a glorious thought, the humility of it; indeed of the whole of this very quiet, humble poem.

[blazeofglory]

You don't have to give me a bougue of roses.
when I'm leaving.
They'll become a pile of remorse
when tomorrow comes.

Just give me a smile,
a spring breeze.
And I'll bury the treasure in my karma,
a trace in next reincarnation.




This is a piece of beauty! An artistic elegance, very beautifully and wittily versified. It cannot go not praised.

[angliholic]

How wistful - the flowers becoming remorse......I know the feeling. Thanks.
Thanks, Dafydd.
I'm glad someone has the same resonance!


This


"And I'll bury the treasure in my karma"

is such a glorious thought, the humility of it; indeed of the whole of this very quiet, humble poem.
Thanks, Prince, for your nice feedback again!


This is a piece of beauty! An artistic elegance, very beautifully and wittily versified. It cannot go not praised.

Thanks, BoG, for the nice comment.
You flattered me so much that I'm on cloud nine again!

[Bar22do]

Modest, as usual... and ever more beautiful. thanks a lot - Bar

[angliholic]

Modest, as usual... and ever more beautiful. thanks a lot - Bar

Thanks, Bar, for your nice words as always!