Loosing control

[Quantum_Leap]

Loosing control,
I felt it before it hits me,
That you are the ONE
...that I love.

You touched my core,
Ceased my thoughts,
Just to step aside
...as I am reaching for you.

Hoping against all odds,
Which keep mounting,
Darling, I might be forever waiting
in a timeless zone...for you.

If you chose another,
Please break the spell
...just turn and don't look back
Before I humble myself .

[Delta40]

passionately written but I must point out and I have noticed this error more and more. Loose is connected with loosing as in loosing a knot

lose is connected with losing as in losing someone.
Loosing you in your poem implies you're releasing them and I don't think that is what you meant.

[Bar22do]

... but perhaps he just loosened control (sometimes it's enough, isn't it), not really lost it... ?
strong and disarming a verse! Bar

[Song of Mercy]

The last line brings this home. I connected with it.