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lacadalet_
08-29-2010, 05:20 PM
I got it
a long excited SMS
with smile
Why did you write me to say
that we don't know each other
I wonder if we were ever classmates
and also best friend during the studies
I wonder why we don't live with both families
in a small town near the river
hillwalker
08-29-2010, 05:27 PM
A very beguiling piece - I'm not sure whether it refers to a misdialled SMS from some unknown texter that the writer received or something deeper. The last two lines are particularly intriguing.....
Delta40
08-29-2010, 05:27 PM
roflmao ode g8!
Bar22do
08-30-2010, 01:00 PM
I got it
a long excited SMS
with smile
Why did you write me to say
that we don't know each other
I wonder if we were ever classmates
and also best friend during the studies
I wonder why we don't live with both families
in a small town near the river
... because today our lives tend to be scattered
the world lost the sense of unity of time space and story
the old rules of classical Greek theatre...
or is it
because our whole earth has become
a small town near the river...? but then -
why we don't live with both families together.
Haunted
08-30-2010, 01:22 PM
I too feel that there are loose ends that need to be tied for a more coherent read. But I like the way you reveal the contents of the sms in layers under layers.
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