poem

[sudharani2905]

hi. i am trying to write poems, it would be best if u give ur opinions and suggestions to improve mine... please.. thank you.. here is the one

GIVE ME A CHANCE,
GIVE ME A CHANCE

GIVE ME A CHANCE
TO BE UR PILLOW
SO THAT I CAN CATCH ALL UR TEARS
WHEN U CRY

GIVE ME A CHANCE
TO BE UR MIRROR
SO THAT I CAN REFLECT UR HEART
WHEN U LOOK AT ME

GIVE ME A CHANCE
TO SPEAK TO U
BECAUSE MY WORDS FAIL
WHEN I SEE U

GIVE ME A CHANCE
TO LIVE WITH U
BECAUSE MY HEART STOPS TO BEAT
WHEN U WALK AWAY