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angliholic
08-29-2010, 12:32 AM
I woke up to a thundershower
early this morning.
Summer heat has finally given way to autumn chill!
I keep telling myself I should wear a smile
on my face
especially when birds are singing,
flowers are still in bloom.

My dear,
Do you happen to see one in your place?
I'm able to walk in the rain without an umbrella,
but I don't think I can manage to go out
without a smile!

dafydd manton
08-29-2010, 03:21 AM
Your work is so tender, so lovely, but this one is so sad. It's really beautifully crafted. Well done!

angliholic
08-29-2010, 04:13 AM
Your work is so tender, so lovely, but this one is so sad. It's really beautifully crafted. Well done!

Thanks, Dafydd, for the nice words.

Have you seen my smile over there by any chance?

adityasam
08-29-2010, 05:22 AM
Good work Angli, another good poem.

Regards!

angliholic
08-29-2010, 08:21 AM
Good work Angli, another good poem.

Regards!

Thanks, Adi, for the nice words again!