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Song of Mercy
08-25-2010, 11:20 PM
Moving on Together

Off in the distance I see a light,
Closer it comes and closer yet,
Now engulfing me, so bright.
Clearly I can see nature abounding
With love for all, Giraffe so tall,
And me so small.

I found you in the light
And together we walk.
It is healing, this togetherness.
We laugh and cry and talk-
As we give the nurturing we need
To move forward with our lives.

lallison
08-26-2010, 09:09 AM
Superb, cool, and sensational. I really liked it. I could totally relate--you captured the idea of it beautifully.

Delta40
08-26-2010, 09:19 AM
with love for all, giraffe so tall really adds to the beauty of this poem.

dafydd manton
08-26-2010, 09:24 AM
Lovely little poem - little in size, but not in content! Thanks!

PrinceMyshkin
08-26-2010, 09:26 AM
Very tender!

angliholic
08-26-2010, 09:26 AM
Thanks for giving us this light of nature!
I can feel the light of love too!

Song of Mercy
08-26-2010, 10:47 AM
Thanks :)