Bouganvillia

[miyako73]

Red,
Almost fuchsia,
Above the bush of greens
In chaos with branches and thorns,
As lovely and delicate but it is not a rose.

[adityasam]

Oh, very good poem. Has an excellent symbolic representation of a part of life. I liked it.

Regards

[lallison]

you have written this so that it reaches a wonderful climax. Very heartfelt, convincing and imaginitive.

[blank|verse]

Nice little poem - I was struck most by line 4 - the chaos of the flowers is what I want to read about and takes it above the rest of the poem which is more literal.