Cry

[Zothar]

Rain

Falling all around

Striking my face

My heart of stone

Cries to the rain

Shed a tear

Hidden

No one can see me

No one must see me...



...Cry

[hillwalker]

I love the imagery behind this - a crying face hiding in the rain - perfect camouflage, and a simple but sincere poem.

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[PrinceMyshkin]

Spare and moving.

[spally]

like hillwalker said. the perfect camouflage. i like your peom very much. its simple, yet heartfelt.

[Delta40]

I like how you use rain to cloak your pain

[lallison]

Superb, cool, and sensational. I really liked it. I could totally relate--you captured the idea of it beautifully.