Love songs

[Delta40]

What I like about you
You make loving fun
as if I was always on your mind
I should be so lucky
You like big butts
and you cannot lie
I hate everything about you
Please don't go
Love hurts
Imagine
Without you
By my side
Me, myself, I

[dafydd manton]

How did this little beauty get lost in the mire of Litnet? I think it's a lovely little expression of the confusion that love and life bring. Thanks for that one.

[PrinceMyshkin]

What I like about you
You make loving fun
as if I was always on your mind
I should be so lucky
You like big butts
and you cannot lie
I hate everything about you
Please don't go
Love hurts
Imagine
Without you
By my side
Me, myself, I

Wow! What a leap from the first two lines to "I hate everything about you" and the subsequent "Please don't go". You've captured the essence of the brutal battle within oneself over the contradictions in loving. Beautiful poem (if bitter).

[Delta40]

I wrote this not long ago but I've commenting on all poems with no review since 1/8

[dafydd manton]

That must be corrected at once!

[dafydd manton]

Delta, I don't know what's gone wrong, but loads of your stuff has had reviews. In fact, only "Harry the Croc" seems to have got overlooked, and there have been some rave reviews. "Thunder" got loads of comment, as did "Catch You Later" In fact, reading back, if you need a chairman for your fan club, Jerry or I are available. It might be worth checking of there is some kind of glitch in the system, because your work is always keenly and enthusiastically received. Hope you get it sorted, and get to read the praise you so richly deserve.

[hillwalker]

I wrote this not long ago but I've commenting on all poems with no review since 1/8

Delta - is this some kind of LitNet felo-de-se you have committed?
Two of the greatest poems posted over the weekend have become relegated to page 2 - your 'truth' and 'hazy memory' ; both deserving a much wider audience. Get a grip!!!

h

[PrinceMyshkin]

I wrote this not long ago but I've commenting on all poems with no review since 1/8

As another poster noted, there might be some glitch, but I do sympathize. I, on the other hand, get plenty of comments and always look forward to them. There's a hard to define line between writing for the health of one's soul, and hoping to be heard and appreciated.

[Delta40]

Delta - is this some kind of LitNet felo-de-se you have committed?
Two of the greatest poems posted over the weekend have become relegated to page 2 - your 'truth' and 'hazy memory' ; both deserving a much wider audience. Get a grip!!!

h

you misunderstand. I commented on all poems by lit-netters with no review since 1/8. i am a most grateful litnetter.

[Jerrybaldy]

LOL Delta
this is constructed completely of song titles you clever sausage :)

[Delta40]

if sausages have an iq, then yes, you're entirely write. I don't do love stuff but this just happened, please feel free to add your own titles to it.

[Jerrybaldy]

Delta
Nothing compares 2 U
from a land down under
you make me feel like dancing

[dafydd manton]

*Rats! Tries to make a rhyme for Beethoven's Fifth, Dvorak's New World and the Mozart Horn Concertos. Fails dismally! Returns to listening to Bugeilio'r Gwenith Gwyn!* There's a song called "You like big butts"? Really? Good grief!!!!

[Delta40]

in an octupuses garden
minstrel in the gallery
I was made for loving you
are you old enough?

:-)

[dafydd manton]

Good Grief!!! A mention for Jethro Tull!! I am mega-impressed!! I will be the Beast, if you've got the Broadsword!

[Delta40]

*Rats! Tries to make a rhyme for Beethoven's Fifth, Dvorak's New World and the Mozart Horn Concertos. Fails dismally! Returns to listening to Bugeilio'r Gwenith Gwyn!* There's a song called "You like big butts"? Really? Good grief!!!!


for you musical amusement
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6v9at5RlFu4

[dafydd manton]

How so unlike the home life of our own queer dean....sorry.....dear queen!

[Jerrybaldy]

in an octupuses garden
minstrel in the gallery
I was made for loving you
are you old enough?

:-)


Sweet 16
Always
Are you experienced?
Are you gonna go my way?

[Delta40]

I am pegasus
jump in my car
play that funky music
you ain't seen nothin yet

(I honestly didn't know one could say so much through song titles!)

[dafydd manton]

OK - I'll admit it -
The fool on the hill!

[Delta40]

OK - I'll admit it -
The fool on the hill!

eh lad

I am the walrus!

[Jerrybaldy]

jump in my car
play that funky music
you ain't seen nothin yet

jump in my car ?? hasslehoff lol.

paradise by the dashboard light
Get down on it
Come outside
blanket on the ground
You dont have to say you love me

[Delta40]

You can't always get what you want
like a virgin
you're once, twice, three times a lady
no milk today

[Jerrybaldy]

stop crying your heart out.
you're always a woman to me
dont look back in anger
breaking up is hard to do

[hillwalker]

What the World needs Now
Titties and Beer

[thank you Burt Bacharach + F Zappa - what a team!]

[Delta40]

I can't get no satisfaction
here comes the sun
alright now
i feel fine

[Jerrybaldy]

If you dont want to **** me then baby **** off.
By wayne county who became jane county I think. And surely the best song title ever :D

We're on a road to nowhere
Big boys dont cry
Dont leave me this way
I did it my way
magic moments
tears on my pillow
We've only just begun
rainy days and mondays always get me down

[Delta40]

Come on eileen
please don't go
I'm gonna keep on loving you
I'll be home on a Monday

[Jerrybaldy]

Monday I've got Friday on my mind
lets dance,
save the last dance for me
I cant dance
dance me to the end of love

[Delta40]

I don't feel like dancing
don't blame it on the boogie
In the Navy
I'm too sexy for this shirt

[angliholic]

What I like about you
You make loving fun
as if I was always on your mind
I should be so lucky
You like big butts
and you cannot lie
I hate everything about you
Please don't go
Love hurts
Imagine
Without you
By my side
Me, myself, I
It does ring a bell!
We have a saying, "The deeper you love, the deeper you hate."

Good job, Delta!

[Jerrybaldy]

knock three times on the ceiling if you want me
Cum on feel the noize
Ha ha said the clown
The tears of a clown
Oh what a circus!

[Delta40]

Slyvia's Mother
How do you do what you do to me
Wuthering Heights
Breakfast in Bed

[Jerrybaldy]

It started with a kiss
sexy eyes
you dont bring me flowers anymore

[Delta40]

this is too much god! I think even that is a title to a song
I was going to - Scarborough Fair (stop it!)
and realised...Yes! we have no Bananas! (arrgh!)
What I'm saying is....Hey Mickey (complete with red pom poms)