My dear, I have to say goodbye now!

[angliholic]

My dear,

I have to say goodbye now!
I have to go with the summer wind
to find out the meanings of life,
to see why there are so many flowers on earth
as charming as you!

When you miss me,
you might as well
take a look at the wandering clouds;
floating like them,
I'm traveling everywhere.

When you see a shooting star
on a darkest night,
you'll know it's my life~
short
but leaving a delightful trail of light!

[Delta40]

sounds like a farewell from the sun!

[Jerrybaldy]

You and your flower obssession Ang. A delightful piece of romanticism. May you never lose it.

[blazeofglory]

Romancing with life! This is angelically engaging! How you can flow with your imagination!

[adityasam]

What a poem. Parting is such a sweet sorrow and you have presented it alluringly.

Un magnifique poème Angli! Continuez votre bon travail! (Pssst...The Little bit of French I know!)

Regards!

[hillwalker]

A great poem for sure - I particularly like the shooting star imagery.....

Mind you, I had to wear my X-Ray specs to read this one!!!!!

[GEETASHREE]

My dear,

I have to say goodbye now!
I have to go with the summer wind
to find out the meanings of life,
to see why there are so many flowers on earth
as charming as you!

When you miss me,
you might as well
take a look at the wandering clouds;
floating like them,
I'm traveling everywhere.

When you see a shooting star
on a darkest night,
you'll know it's my life~
short
but leaving a delightful trail of light!





Angli! Please don't say goodbye like that. I can imagine how the heart will break. So romantic and powerful imagery. Wonderful as ever

[Maryd.]

Very nice. Well done.

[angliholic]

Thank you all, my friends, for the kind words.
And sorry for the belated thanks for I was too ill to scribble or type for a couple of days. I feel much better now.



sounds like a farewell from the sun!

Indeed, it's from a lonely traveler!


You and your flower obssession Ang. A delightful piece of romanticism. May you never lose it.

Thanks, Jerry.
I hope my romanticism will leave one day but not the beauty!



Romancing with life! This is angelically engaging! How you can flow with your imagination!
Thanks, BoG, for the praise.
I think it's in the blood. There are many practical things in life that I just can't deal well with. Having whimsical thoughts is all I have.


What a poem. Parting is such a sweet sorrow and you have presented it alluringly.


Un magnifique poème Angli! Continuez votre bon travail! (Pssst...The Little bit of French I know!)

Regards!
Thanks, Adi, for the kind words again.

Parting is such a sweet sorrow! How can a 17 kid know this thing? You sound like an old hand!
And I can read your French without googling it becaust it looks like English!


A great poem for sure - I particularly like the shooting star imagery.....

Mind you, I had to wear my X-Ray specs to read this one!!!!!

Thanks, Hillwalker, for the nice feedback.
I'm learning from you now and then.


Angli! Please don't say goodbye like that. I can imagine how the heart will break. So romantic and powerful imagery. Wonderful as ever
Thanks, Geeta, for the nice comment!
But all good things must come to an end! That's life! All we can do is leave a bit trail of light!


Very nice. Well done.

Thanks, Maryd, for the nice words.

[adityasam]

Not at all an old hand, just visit my profile page.....

[angliholic]

Not at all an old hand, just visit my profile page.....

You're young in age but mature and sophiscated in thoughts!

[lallison]

Lovely, I do really like this; I'm sure others will have more detailed comments, but it conjures up for me a vivid picture of the story you're telling and the emotions it evoked. This is the meat of a neat little short story if you cared to work it up. Beautiful image and so delicately drawn and colored in for us. How much of a present moment is packed into these lines! That last verse is brave and the most affecting of the whole.

[angliholic]

Lovely, I do really like this; I'm sure others will have more detailed comments, but it conjures up for me a vivid picture of the story you're telling and the emotions it evoked. This is the meat of a neat little short story if you cared to work it up. Beautiful image and so delicately drawn and colored in for us. How much of a present moment is packed into these lines! That last verse is brave and the most affecting of the whole.

Thanks, lallison, for the lovely comment and advice!

I'm a lazy bone: I don't like to write and read something more than 500 words.
So, it's most befitting for me to scribble just a few lines for fun!

Best regards