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Delta40
08-18-2010, 05:41 PM
little her
sits on the gate
waiting
swinging bony legs
stretching her socks
as far as they will go
without falling back
picking leaves from the hedge
blowing ladybirds home
studying the veiny patterns
of nature
waiting
for strong hands to lift her
to feel the sanctuary
of familial love
as she holds on tight to him
waiting
for the exciting thrill
when she sits on his moped
smiling as he wheels it
down the garden path
to the coal shed
laughing
waiting

dafydd manton
08-18-2010, 05:45 PM
Delta, that is a GORGEOUS poem! I so, so love that one, with the imagery. A beautiful picture of an almost timeless scene. Makes me miss my daughters! Thank You!

Delta40
08-18-2010, 05:47 PM
thanks dafydd. I always appreciate your feedback

Jerrybaldy
08-18-2010, 05:58 PM
Delta
glad to see you loved your Daddy and you have memories of the good kind ( If I am reading this right) . It made me feel nostalgic for a past I wasnt a part of and that I think would be all down to your expression of memory.
Loverrly
Jerry

hillwalker
08-18-2010, 05:59 PM
So nice to have you share a sweet poem like this with us..... a mellow moment.

Delta40
08-18-2010, 06:07 PM
thanks everyone.