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angliholic
08-18-2010, 04:12 AM
When Zephyr calls,
the wind bell,
hanging from the ceiling,
will ring.

When you visit,
my heart,
pining away for longing,
will sing.
aliengirl
08-18-2010, 11:07 AM
Beautiful and concise!
angliholic
08-18-2010, 11:11 AM
Beautiful and concise!

Thanks, AG, for your visit!

Do you hear the wind bell ringing?

Do you hear my heart singing?
aliengirl
08-19-2010, 08:03 AM
Hmmm... trying to hear. :wink5:
PrinceMyshkin
08-21-2010, 01:55 PM
Like two puffs of breath combined into one quiet poem.
angliholic
08-22-2010, 03:05 PM
Sorry for the belated response for I was too ill to type! I'm much better now!


Hmmm... trying to hear. :wink5:
There are many ~ings in the scribbling; it's like the wind bell is tingling!


Like two puffs of breath combined into one quiet poem.

Thanks, Prince, for your kind feedback!