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Hawkman
08-18-2010, 03:47 AM
For hillwaker, with thanks, inspired by his comment on "Dark Hall".
Gargoyles
At night, when the stars are all shrouded
by clouds which leak rain on the ground,
the gargoyles desert all their perches
and on one church roof gather round.
They take up their places on wall tops
and squat with malignant intent,
then channelling rain from the rooftop,
regurgitate runoff, unpent.
As they vomit forth streams of cold water
on unwary folk down below,
in gurgling voices they mutter
and strain all the bugs from the flow.
They come from the time before gutters,
with drainpipes completely unknown,
and these modern fads just annoy them;
their purpose, it seems, is out grown.
So under the cover of darkness
they plot to recover their role,
they’ll rip down the gutters and drainpipes
and reclaim the job that they stole.
hillwalker
08-18-2010, 05:10 AM
A wonderful piece, Hawk. It never ceases to amaze me where you find your inspiration. And the final stanza, gargoyles reclaiming their rightful role in society, brilliant.
H
PS - I'm honoured by the mention btw
Hawkman
08-18-2010, 06:55 PM
You're more than welcome, you deserve it :D
Best, H
Jerrybaldy
08-18-2010, 06:59 PM
All drainpipes to be replaced by their Gargoyle prescindents. Sign me up Hawk.
Jerry
Hawkman
08-18-2010, 07:02 PM
As a drainpipe or a gargoyle?
H
Jerrybaldy
08-18-2010, 07:05 PM
A gargoyle of course
Hawkman
08-18-2010, 07:12 PM
See you on Westminster Abbey roof at midnight. (bring your own dead pigeon and we'll feed the 5,000!)
Best, H
PS, leave the roof leads alone :D
Jerrybaldy
08-18-2010, 07:18 PM
yea. Like the roof leads are gonna be still there by the time I arrive.
btw we are late. lets fly.
Hawkman
08-18-2010, 07:23 PM
I meant tomorrow midnight, old chum, don't break anything in the rush!
Jerrybaldy
08-18-2010, 07:30 PM
flapping all over the house here, have flown into the french doors twice, bloody nosed and now you tell me its tomorrow.
Hawkman
08-18-2010, 07:35 PM
Well if you walk and take it steady you could be in Reading by Saturday. but if you really want to fly, can I suggest you open the door before you try to fly through it.
Jerrybaldy
08-18-2010, 07:43 PM
Sound advice of the type I have come to expect. Tell my bloody beak that (yes its a beak now, I am in full character).
Chirp.
Hawkman
08-18-2010, 07:45 PM
You could always flag down a passing Troll to give you a lift. Welsh ones are very obliging, or so I'm told.
lallison
08-19-2010, 06:55 AM
It's a fun read hawk. It reminds me of reading harry potter: gargoyles come to life, taking on the duties of the drain, J.K. Rawlings couldn't have written it better. nice piece of insight.
PrinceMyshkin
08-19-2010, 07:44 AM
As always, the meter and rhyme seem effortless - and elegant, and the story, as is often the case with you, is chilling.
Hawkman
08-19-2010, 08:21 AM
I feel privileged to live in a place where there is a great abundance of very old, gothic buildings densely populated by gargoyles. True, the old churches and manor houses are a little weathered these days, with the faces of the stone beasties somewhat pitted, if not completely erased, by time, but the masons replace them on the important buildings every so often. Sometimes they have old, rusty pipes protuding from their mouths to concentrate the flow of water and throw it further off. It makes them look as though they are chewing cigar stubs, like Hollywood action heros in war films.
So thanks to you both, lall and Prince, for appreciating my little homage to the humble gargoyle :D
May they always populate our churches and cathedrals.
Live long and prosper, H
Bar22do
08-21-2010, 01:13 PM
Your imagination matches your talent, Hawk and they both whirl on the lofty roofs of Art! humbly yours - Bar
Hawkman
08-23-2010, 07:03 AM
Thanks Bar, your generosity of spirit never fails to refresh. I had my doubts about this one to be honest. I thought it a little weak so thanks for liking it. H
dafydd manton
08-23-2010, 07:07 AM
You could always flag down a passing Troll to give you a lift. Welsh ones are very obliging, or so I'm told.
Ahem!
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