Crohn's Disease.

[zoolane]

I wish this flare-up,
would go way forever.
I wish someone would,
do swap intestines,
just for few days.

I wish didn't this thing.
I wish that didn't have to,
find or be near toilet,
when I am away from home.

If you pick me up and shake,
I would rattle with pills inside me.

[hoope]

being a nurse .. i can understand.. !
Nice poem and so expressing :)

[dafydd manton]

Profound sympathy - and beautifully expressed!

[ampoule]

You sound so young to have Crohn's. I am sorry for your pain.

[hillwalker]

You force the reader to share your experience in a very un-sensational way, and in using such a simple style make the message hit home that much harder.

[zoolane]

Thank you for comments.

Hoope only I can expressing my feelings, this 4th week.

Dafydd really don't need sympathy but thank you, it disease were you live your to best that time or control you.

Ampoule do not feel sorry but thing happened and learn to cope with it or don't.

Hillwalker this is just outlined of how feel and could be lots graphic but sure most people heard of the disease draw own conclude about it.

[Jerrybaldy]

Thanks for the inside view zoo
BW
JB