Spanish Romance inside My Guitar

[angliholic]

A casual glimpse may leave
a bruise
on your delicate luscious skin.

At the thought of
feeling your curvy figure
in my arms,
from head to toe, I tremble!

Caressing your silky hair softly
with one hand,
I strum your heart strings gently
with the other
when we start to play Spanish Romance,
the forbidden game.

Ah! The melody you're humming is so sweet,
so alluring
I'm tingling over and over again.

[hillwalker]

A beautiful poem - one can almost hear the strings of a Spanish guitar being strummed in the background.

You might consider the word 'curvy' again - without being sexist, in English the word has now become accepted as a gentler way of describing body shapes that are rather larger and rounder than your typical skinny supermodel. If your intention was to suggest someone who is slender and curvy perhaps a word like 'willowy' might be kinder.

H

[adityasam]

Hermoso poema Angli, los números se puede sentir dentro de la pieza. Sigue escribiendo algunas obras maestras más.

Regards!

[angliholic]

A beautiful poem - one can almost hear the strings of a Spanish guitar being strummed in the background.

You might consider the word 'curvy' again - without being sexist, in English the word has now become accepted as a gentler way of describing body shapes that are rather larger and rounder than your typical skinny supermodel. If your intention was to suggest someone who is slender and curvy perhaps a word like 'willowy' might be kinder.

H

Thanks, Hillwalker, for the nice feedback and advice.

I'm learning a lot from your comments.

Wish you well!


Hermoso poema Angli, los números se puede sentir dentro de la pieza. Sigue escribiendo algunas obras maestras más.

Regards!


Thanks, Adi, for the feedback.

But what kind of language is that?

Would you say it again in English?

Wish you well!

[adityasam]

Thats Spanish. Try google translate and check it out.

[angliholic]

Thats Spanish. Try google translate and check it out.

Roger!

YOu're a genius, Adi. Incredible, so young and so good at four different languages! Don't you consider being a linguist?

[adityasam]

I just love spanish and Rafa. Don't know any more foreign languages, but I can do with a bit of French. Linguist is too much for me.

[Haunted]

what a melodiously sweet poem. I understand the use of "curvy", to me it's a double entendre for a woman's body and a guitar with it curves. Now the word willowy feels wimpy, it lost all sensuality for me. One way to get around it is to write it as follows:

At the thought of
feeling your curves
in my arms,
from head to toe, I tremble!

Tthis is a bit more sensual so it might not be something you're looking for. In any event take it only as a suggestion.

[angliholic]

what a melodiously sweet poem. I understand the use of "curvy", to me it's a double entendre for a woman's body and a guitar with it curves. Now the word willowy feels wimpy, it lost all sensuality for me. One way to get around it is to write it as follows:

At the thought of
feeling your curves
in my arms,
from head to toe, I tremble!

Tthis is a bit more sensual so it might not be something you're looking for. In any event take it only as a suggestion.

Thanks, Haunted, for your kind comment and advice.

I did think of what you explanned!

What about this version? If it doesn't sound right, please tell me again.

At the thought of
feeling your curvy figure
in my arms


Wish you well!

[Jerrybaldy]

Nice Ang
You mispelt figure. and hold on.... what no flowers??
Hope you meet her soon
best wishes
Jerry

[Haunted]

Thanks, Haunted, for your kind comment and advice.

I did think of what you explanned!

What about this version? If it doesn't sound right, please tell me again.

At the thought of
feeling your curvy figure
in my arms


Wish you well!


hey, that works!!! Go for it! Good stuff.

[angliholic]

I just love spanish and Rafa. Don't know any more foreign languages, but I can do with a bit of French. Linguist is too much for me.
Thanks, Adi.

I found you have a talent for languages.
It's a pity if you don't set your mind on the discipline.


Nice Ang
You mispelt figure. and hold on.... what no flowers??
Hope you meet her soon
best wishes
Jerry
Thanks, Jerry, for the nice comment.
Who is her?
Love in the mist,
In my dream!


hey, that works!!! Go for it! Good stuff.

Thanks, Haunted, again for the feedback!

Wish all of you well