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Delta40
08-16-2010, 06:01 PM
poached egg
vegemite and toast
key board sticky
with orange yolk
morning
fertile thinking
new day
rebirth

Jerrybaldy
08-16-2010, 06:22 PM
You Colonials and your vegemite. Thank God for Men at work or we would never know. Love your freedom of thought.
Jerry

dafydd manton
08-16-2010, 06:28 PM
That has to be the first time that the words Vegemite, fertile and rebirth have been used in the same poem. We stand on the cusp, the cusp of History, my poetic brothers....*gesticulates wildly*

That's one of those lovely little pastiches of silliness that we all live with that remains in the mind for ages. Thanks!!

Hawkman
08-17-2010, 04:09 AM
A bit more cheerful than the last couple of offerings D40. Sounds like you've shrugged off the blues. Good On yer!

I really enjoyed this. just what I needed 1st thing.

Best, H

Delta40
08-17-2010, 04:18 AM
don't have the blues


want to be a morris dancer

hillwalker
08-17-2010, 05:16 AM
I really enjoyed this, D40. I guess, following yesterday's angst, you finally found someone to slap before getting round to committing this fine verse to paper. Great stuff.

H