wring it out

[Delta40]

stay afloat
hospital sample
testing reveals
bacteria of dark
broken bird
fragile basket
dirty laundry
sparkle missing
urine pissing
soak up the sun
michael jackson
nose more than eye
hollow, lonely
murky pit
wring it out

[Jerrybaldy]

For the life of me I can't get to the bottom of it, but I love it none the less.

[Delta40]

snap shots from my mind really. I don't think I'm sounding poetic atm - probably because I'm happy and can't be bothered exploring my dark side to any great depth!

[Jerrybaldy]

Aaaahhh. Happiness. The death of creativity. The cleaned up, sobered up, happy rock idol cant write a song to save his hairy *** :D

Disagree with you though Delta, you are sounding most poetic above :)

[lallison]

I do really like this; I'm sure others will have more detailed comments but it conjures up for me a vivid picture of the story you're telling and the emotions it evoked.