PDA

View Full Version : The Beat Poets Only Gift



Jassy Melson
08-13-2010, 04:29 PM
Rapping fragmented prose poems
in the coffeehouse of the August moon;
bored patrons lounge languidly
trying to look cool as they sip weak tea.
The would-be hip-poet savagely rips off
line after line of nonsense
pretending in his grimness
that he's Allen Ginsburg reincarnated
and that he doesn't care
what the patrons think.

You can hear the hissing escaping
from the would-be poet's side
as he keeps reciting in an angry monotone
the adventures of Allah Grimsborg
the incendiary nihilist poet
who only believes in himself,
all else being an illusion.
The audience dwindles as the angry rapper
hisses and spits out fragments of prose mixed with bits
of rhyme to give it a poetic flavor.
By the time he ends the audience is down to three.

So it was and so it is and so it shall be.
Some things will never change.

You tried to kill poetry but you died in the attempt.
You thought you could kill it by rapping
and by mixing prose with poetic fragments.
Poetry outlived you.
While you struck at it with mallets
and tried to stab its heart with spikes,
poetry went about its business
as you grew older and more desperate
and more incoherent.

You thought you were recreating poetry,
breathing new life into an old worn-out vessel;
you believed poetry was dead and required
a new voice to jump-start it.
But the voice you had in mind
was anti-poetic (though you didn't seem to notice),
and you proceeded to crowd the airways
with gobbledygook and nonsense
that you vowed was a new poetry.

You were in vogue for a few years
till the people finally saw through
your game and dismissed you.
And you slithered away still hissing
and spouting your pseudo-Zen and rapping
your fragmented prose poems
till your audience was reduced to one.

Your only gift was a bunch of hot-air balloons.
They hissed angrily for awhile
and then were silent.
Poetry outlived you.

Hawkman
08-13-2010, 06:21 PM
A rant after my own heart, rather well expressed, although even as good poets can occasionally produce a bummer, bad poets can come up with winners by accident :D It never does to dismiss everything out of hand... waving a wand for a blanket ban...

I remember the angry punk poets on the Tube in London in the eighties who would yell their defiance into your face while you waited for the next stop. They always wore WW2 army greatcoats for some reason. Strange but true.

Best, H

Jassy Melson
08-13-2010, 07:43 PM
I wanted to arouse some reaction either pro or con. Maybe apathy has won.

Jerrybaldy
08-13-2010, 08:04 PM
enjoyed it Jassy, but my knowledge of beat poets is limited and i suspect that to some part that is true of many and that may be what you see as apathy. Our ignorance.
Bw
JB

Jassy Melson
08-13-2010, 08:06 PM
May be. The subject is dated I suppose

Jerrybaldy
08-13-2010, 08:12 PM
dated but in no way irrelevant, is just specialised but that means people like hawk will get it and esoteric knowldge can be shared ;)

lallison
08-13-2010, 08:19 PM
Superb. No joke, absolutely fabulous. Very, very poignant. Thanks!

Jassy Melson
08-14-2010, 04:53 AM
Thank you. I suppose what I wrote is a rant, but I wanted it to be in the form of a Beat poem, to add to the satiric element of the poem

PrinceMyshkin
08-14-2010, 07:47 AM
Thank you. I suppose what I wrote is a rant, but I wanted it to be in the form of a Beat poem, to add to the satiric element of the poem

But in casting this in the form or voice of a beat poet, haven't you undermined your own theme? I somehow missed the heart of this invisible rapper.

Jassy Melson
08-14-2010, 11:45 AM
This poem is in two parts. In the first part I describe a Beat-Rapper; in the second part I get much more general and describe the Beat poets (from my perspective) in general terms. I don't think I undermine my own theme; I think it comes out throughout the poem.