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Lamar Cole
08-11-2010, 07:52 PM
The stars shone bright tonight.
One star shone brighter than the rest.
That star reminded me of you darling.
The brightest star in my life.

One star stood apart from the rest.
One star made my heart pound like a jackhammer.
One star excited my soul.
Giving me tingles from my head to toes.

adityasam
08-12-2010, 03:45 AM
Very Good Poem!, An excellent way of expressing your love in the simplest yet powerful poetry.


One star excited my soul.
Giving me tingles from my head to toes.

Favourite Lines!

Regards