A Tanka Just After Dawn

[miyako73]

The sun just came in
through the bamboo window pane
warming my bare skin ,
my blushing cheeks, my cold chin
waking me up from a dream.

[Jerrybaldy]

Hi miyako
were the cheeks blushing because of the dream or to fulfil the tanka?
Sounds much sweeter than most of my awakenings :)
cheers
JB

[miyako73]

Whatever you want. :) some of my poems are tabula rasa-- can be erotic, morbid, or plain nonsense.