Regret

[kittypaws]

I see all the concessions you make;
There is too much at stake.
Love has become heartache
Which is a huge mistake.

Enabler; you had become
I A dreamer, livening in sin;
Taking your time, love and giving spirit
With nothing for you to win.

My heart is in pain;
Because of my lonely gain
Nothing good has been attained
Each party will suffer the pain.

We need to set free the emotions
That tries to bind us closer.
We both need to be free
Free; of this non-lover’s misery.

A wasted kiss upon lips
That was never meant to be.
A sunset that has set
That is the relationship


Kittypaws

[Delta40]

I think the constant rhyming had the effect of you slapping yourself over the whole experience, which is very effective.

[dafydd manton]

Wow! Don't know what to say, except that your emotions are beautifully expressed. I'm sure that anyone who has been in that awful position of the sham realtionship will resonate with it. Brilliant.