his green eyes

[Haunted]

his green eyes


so dazzling
these emeralds

so dear
this unconditional love

so distant
like he didn’t see me

so dilated
it only means one thing




it’s so definitive
and i’m so in denial



the vet says
their eyes
never close right
when they
die

[Jerrybaldy]

so haunted, Haunted. Wish it was a doctor not a vet. You have a way with words. Ethereal just sprung to mind. Trashy never does.
Jerry.

[Delta40]

beautiful poem haunted

[Haunted]

Jerry, you're forever so kind. Ethereal is such a beautiful word, thanks. Still, it will wind up in Trashy eventually...and I hope you will again grace it with a kind comment.

Delta, thank you so much!!!

[Jerrybaldy]

Would that be trashy poems the most mis-named of all threads ?

[Haunted]

hmmm.....Jerry's now critical of my naming abilities :p

[Maryd.]

Haunted... This one is uplifting. Mwah to you dear.

[PrinceMyshkin]

Taut - and very poignant.

[Jerrybaldy]

Not your naming abilities, your self depreciation :P
cheers
Jerry

[Haunted]

ahh that's just what I do best Jerry. Thanks for being so kind!

[Haunted]

thanks Prince, I appreciated your comment!

Mary, it's only uplifting in that it brings me closer to him again in the poem. Your mwahs are always heartfelt!

[NikolaiI]

it's really nice poem, but it makes me really sad.

[Haunted]

Thank you Nik, that was Apricot, sorry it made you sad.

[NikolaiI]

oh, don't be sorry, dear... <3