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lallison
08-09-2010, 07:21 AM
lashing could stand much less stumbling.

Hawkman
08-09-2010, 07:31 AM
A cheeky little number, lall. Says what it needs to though.

Best, H

hillwalker
08-09-2010, 09:13 AM
Certainly brief - no doubt exercising your right to remain silent. I like this one.

Jerrybaldy
08-09-2010, 04:24 PM
A short sentence that could result in a long one.
Nice
JB

Bar22do
08-09-2010, 05:27 PM
hmmm.. then the N too (I recently mentioned them) would deserve to be sentenced to carefully read Pound's Epitaphs... anyhow, no one's path from childhood to adulthood has ever been other than zig-zagging... Bar

lallison
08-11-2010, 06:15 AM
Thanks for the comments. For the record, it's not autobiographical, not literally anyhow. I came across it while looking through some old folders of mine when visiting at my mother's house last July and liked it. It was untitled, so I stuck that one on there. I thought it was fitting.