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angliholic
08-08-2010, 10:49 PM
When trees begin to put on orange and red,

I'll paint my longing for you on a maple leaf,

leave it in the air, and wish

a gentle breeze may blow it into your dream!
PrinceMyshkin
08-09-2010, 07:56 AM
How elegant and succinct! Thank you.
angliholic
08-09-2010, 08:58 AM
How elegant and succinct! Thank you.

Thanks, Prince, for your kind words.
adityasam
08-09-2010, 09:46 AM
Elegance and Brilliance at show!


a gentle breeze may blow it into your dream!

Beautiful.

Regards!
angliholic
08-09-2010, 10:01 AM
Elegance and Brilliance at show!



Beautiful.

Regards!

Thanks, Adi, for your kind words.

I'm glad I can write something beautiful for peope to appreciate!

And this is the only goal I want to achieve!


Regards
snowdrop17
08-09-2010, 12:43 PM
Superb. It touched my heart.
aliengirl
08-09-2010, 02:22 PM
Hello dear! :smile5:
What can I say when others have used all the befitting adjectives. You really express yourself in such a lovely way, it seems to mirror my own feelings. The last line is the best.
angliholic
08-09-2010, 10:41 PM
Superb. It touched my heart.

Thanks, snowdrop, for the touching remarks.

Your nice words are my inspiration to scribble something beautiful once in a blue moon!

For what it's worth, at the sight of your screen name, my heart tingles all over!


Hello dear! :smile5:
What can I say when others have used all the befitting adjectives. You really express yourself in such a lovely way, it seems to mirror my own feelings. The last line is the best.

Thanks, AG, for the most moving feedback of "mirror my own feelings."

But I wonder why it is so! Did you imply you had wanted to write a similar one for some boy you have a crush on?
aliengirl
08-10-2010, 07:42 AM
Oh, no. I didn't mean it that way. I like the way you capture the color, the sounds, the very prospect of a natural scene and I would love to write like that.
Maryd.
08-10-2010, 07:44 AM
Oh, I just love that... You are too precious.
angliholic
08-10-2010, 07:58 AM
Oh, no. I didn't mean it that way. I like the way you capture the color, the sounds, the very prospect of a natural scene and I would love to write like that.

Thanks, AG, for the reply.

Nature is beautiful and overflowing with pretty jems, pearls, and gold.
And the beauty is that they cost us nothing as long as we spend time looking for them!


Oh, I just love that... You are too precious.

Thanks, Maryd, for your kind words.
I'm not precious at all. The nature's beauty is most precious!

I love your natural, simple, and evocative style of writing!
Maryd.
08-10-2010, 08:07 AM
...I love your natural, simple, and evocative style of writing!

Thank you dear.
Pensive
08-10-2010, 08:18 AM
Beautiful!
Brief and beautiful! :)
angliholic
08-10-2010, 08:48 AM
Thank you dear.

You're most welcome, Mary.


Beautiful!
Brief and beautiful! :)

Thanks, Pensive, for the praise.

I found that you are also fond of nature, leaves, flowers, and green grass.

Then we are co-travellers on the same country lane.

I feel less lonely now!