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Delta40
08-06-2010, 06:19 PM
amidst
the hiss and purge
of knowledge
no cat hears
my widdle mew
in the serious discussion room
They spit
'let her eat fish?'
Caterwaul if you must
mewsli with milk
is good enough for me

mazHur
08-06-2010, 07:12 PM
amidst
the hiss and purge
of knowledge
no cat hears
my widdle mew
in the serious discussion room
They spit
'let her eat fish?'
Caterwaul if you must
mewsli with milk
is good enough for me

Nice! in future I will lend a more serious ear to my cat's caterwauling!!:)

Jerrybaldy
08-06-2010, 07:30 PM
Delta, Delta, Delta. Cats. Thats your thing. Delta loved cats. I didnt mind but once in the midst of passion she coughed up a furball on my pillow. I keep it now in a tobacco tin. It reminds me of the good times. That was her thing ;)
JB

Delta40
08-06-2010, 07:35 PM
slurkie and hung phat chow
are the only cats
that I have now
they spew up bikkies
and furballs wild
but the dog is quick to eat them
like sweets for a child

Jerrybaldy
08-06-2010, 07:50 PM
Delta. You are a fruitcake. Full of chewy raisins. It takes time on here through comments and posts to decide who is who. But you are a fruitcake. I love fruitcake.

PrinceMyshkin
08-06-2010, 08:23 PM
I enjoyed the wit in both your original post and your free verse respond to one of the comments.

AuntShecky
08-07-2010, 02:03 PM
A witty little ditty! Especially liked the pun in "Mewsli."

Delta40
08-07-2010, 05:44 PM
thank you. In my world I have plenty to say but it doesn't come out very well on discussion forums!