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ampoule
08-06-2010, 05:45 AM
Fount

It must have been the day
Or the night
Midday
Or midnight
That the thought of you
Crossed over me
And I arose
Unto my genuflection

ampoule, August Sixth, Two Thousand Ten

PrinceMyshkin
08-06-2010, 08:03 AM
"Less is more." In the case of this poem, much, much more. I love it, and to compensate for its brevity I will read it over and over again.

Welcome back!

ampoule
08-06-2010, 11:22 PM
Prince, you are always so kind. Thank you. I see so many new names. Can't wait to read their poetry!

angliholic
08-07-2010, 12:14 AM
Fount

It must have been the day
Or the night
Midday
Or midnight
That the thought of you
Crossed over me
And I arose
Unto my genuflection

ampoule, August Sixth, Two Thousand Ten
The love sentiment is hauntingly touching and beautiful!

AuntShecky
08-07-2010, 02:01 PM
Long time no see! It's wonderful to have you back.

ampoule
08-07-2010, 11:08 PM
Thank you angiholic! It's good to be back Auntie! ;) Thanks!!

Bar22do
08-08-2010, 07:25 PM
I see it late, but I read it well and - savour it. Welcome back, ampoule. Bar

mazHur
08-08-2010, 08:41 PM
Fount

It must have been the day
Or the night
Midday
Or midnight
That the thought of you
Crossed over me
And I arose
Unto my genuflection

ampoule, August Sixth, Two Thousand Ten

Hi Amp.
Nice ditty!

ampoule
08-08-2010, 11:48 PM
Thanks Bar and maz!! I have to get busy reading now. ;)

Hawkman
08-09-2010, 06:56 AM
Very good poem, ampoule. Loved the expressive brevity. thanks, H

ampoule
08-09-2010, 07:04 PM
Thank YOU! I have heard some very nice things about you so I am very pleased that you stopped by to read and comment.