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miyako73
08-05-2010, 03:04 AM
After these,
My last ones,
What shall I do?
Should I trace the veins of the rose
Or connect the blinking stars?
Should I look for the lost penny
Or watch the cleaning infomercials?
Should I count the even backwards
Or recite the long prayer with no end?
Should I touch the stucco walls
Or run my fingers on the wood grains?
Should I smell the old gas oven
Or pick the drying leaves of cilantro?
Should I google my complete name
Or read the yellow pages of the phonebook?
Should I eat the rice krispies one by one
Or search the whole pepper in my pasta?
Should I read the book about birds
Or imagine the azure ocean?
What Shall I do
After popping these?
Pfft! Pfft! Pfft!

Delta40
08-05-2010, 03:05 AM
Oooh I did not know that popping bubble wrap could give one such creative insight. Imagine me there, popping them with you!

miyako73
08-05-2010, 03:14 AM
:) Just having fun with my boredom.

Delta40
08-05-2010, 03:15 AM
your expression of boredom is impressive.

angliholic
08-05-2010, 06:27 AM
very imaginative and creative!

hillwalker
08-05-2010, 09:40 AM
I thought there was more to this than boredom, and t sounded more like the foil wrapping being broken off some tablets than the popping of bubble-wrap..... maybe that's the way my warped mind works.

But the poem is genuinely original, wry, bizarre and so true to life. You have a real talent.

H

Jerrybaldy
08-05-2010, 04:35 PM
Bubblewrap? Why did I not think of that. I was thinking popcorn. what am I thinking. What sort of popcorn goes pfft?
Best wishes
Jerry