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Revolte
08-05-2010, 02:28 AM
With every rapid stream
flowing through my mind
so many thoughts just drown
in every midnight's time,
but every hug not hugged
and every kiss not kissed
brings back the morning's frown
and shuns the midnight's bliss,
so everyday I wake
is a new day less alive
'cause everyday I'm born
and everyday I die.

angliholic
08-05-2010, 02:42 AM
Hi, Revolte.
YOu took the lines from my mouth--so everyday I wake is a new day less alive 'cause everyday I'm born and everyday I die.

I have been there!

Nice tender little nostalgic poem!

Delta40
08-05-2010, 03:04 AM
I'm still waiting to be born!

hillwalker
08-05-2010, 09:17 AM
This has a certain swing to it that I like. Good stuff, Revolte.

H