she left me

[mazHur]

the day she left me
I threw away my watch
there was no sense then
keeping track of time
second by second, minute by minute
hour by hour!
Without my watch I am relieved
of keeping track of time
infact there is no need to do that
after you went away!
Now I wake up and sleep
by the wink of my eyes!
anytime my eyes wink to open up
I take it as Day;
Night comes whenever my winks close!

[Delta40]

much more poignant than mine. I thought perhaps time would fly and you would not feel so trapped by it!

[angliholic]

Very nice poem!
You threw away the time along with the watch!
Love hurts like the thorns of a rose.
Love stings like a yellow jacket.
Hope you find your watch back in no time!

[Beautifull]

Beautiful poem! It is very cute!

[BienvenuJDC]

Time without a watch is stagnant, like life without love...

[Maryd.]

Lovely... Who needs a watch when everything is the same.

[Beautifull]

Time without a watch is stagnant, like life without love...

Very good too. I agree.

[mazHur]

i deeply appreciate and am thankful to all of you for reading and commenting on my poem. :)

best wishes/Maz

[Beautifull]

i deeply appreciate and am thankful to all of you for reading and commenting on my poem. :)

best wishes/Maz

Keep up the good work, and we'll keep reading. :D

[Pensive]

Nice work out there!


Time without a watch is stagnant, like life without love...

ditto.

[liza]

I like this poem, is very cute .. and I can understand it .. One of those poems that I don't need mr. google translator : ) I'm going to throw away my watch also :)

[mazHur]

thanks y'all!!:)