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Asphara
08-04-2010, 10:19 AM
a man
is in the door frame, a man
now large in the doorway,
larger in the frame now
leaning into the frame

a man
at a naked angle
filament of light encircles
muscle in golden halo fire,

a man,
statue of a man, that damn
chisel man, chiselled by a
thousand hands, chiselled
by a thousand years

murderous, cruel,
violent hands of pig
dog man

putrid smell,
intellect and hanging lungs
in leaden heads that make
the dead swell, fatten,
that make horse faces
grunting pig noises

a man
grinding sounds of a stream
furrowing an error in

coming
down the
stairs now,
lady fingers
tracing banister
where death swells
fattens and where the
sky yields another yellow

sun,
lady fingers open up the window,
closes eyes,
closes mind

against the wind, the sky, the eyes unfold -
a world grasps - wind, rope, iron, a white sky -
a grey and angry sky.
a different angle
on the West.

from the train, pylons slice with black lines,
dispensing fingers of grey clouds, grey land,
brings forth an opal grey, dank, yellowing,

brings forth a yellow centre full of busses
cars workers shoppers, desperate poor
counters, guzzlers, life haters,
lifeless wife beaters but
No angle on the West.

Delta40
08-22-2010, 10:28 AM
wow. that room is permeated with man descriptions that would make me open the window too. his size is excellently shown against the doorframe

PrinceMyshkin
08-22-2010, 10:56 AM
I could recognize the power of a fertile, active imagination but couldn't grasp the context within which to understand this.

dafydd manton
08-22-2010, 11:14 AM
The whole thing seems to ooze fear, from beginning to end, right down to the end, which seemed to me to be a comment on Western society? A discomfiting but excellent read.

lacadalet_
08-22-2010, 11:31 AM
a man
is in the door frame, a man
now large in the doorway,
larger in the frame now
leaning into the frame

a man
at a naked angle
filament of light encircles
muscle in golden halo fire,

a man,
statue of a man, that damn
....
....


"Believe me, man!"