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Sandi
08-02-2010, 06:02 PM
The white box is getting closer.
A black marble stone with a white rose.
The call of silence whispers in my ear.
To lay in a coffin in a quiet pose.

I don't want anyone around,
Because they were not there when I was alive.
So continue to do what you do,
Go ahead and use people to strive.

The ones I dearly love will survive,
I'm sure not many will cry.
I don't want the tears, I've cried enough,
Just walk past and say good bye.

Teddy/BASH
6/1/08

Delta40
08-02-2010, 06:10 PM
this poem is beautifully heartbreaking in its sad truthfulness.

hillwalker
08-03-2010, 06:10 AM
A beautifully simple, honest poem.

Jerrybaldy
08-03-2010, 09:32 AM
Beautiful and sad and I'm sure with a sad tale to tell.
best wishes
JB

Sandi
08-03-2010, 10:37 AM
Thank You. It is one of my older poems. I am still keying in all the other ones on my computer and will post some more soon. Also my short stories.