Desire

[Delta40]

I tremble in the shadow of greatness
feeling little and quite meek
the sight of this smooth hard outline
surpasses my meagre member
It is clean, shiny even
and makes very little noise
like a well oiled appendage
I gasp at its silent power
and flutter just like a woman
'you're so much bigger than I thought'
I choke out the words
run my fingers across its rigid length
I whisper 'I want so much to play with you'
My heart beats erratic as I engage
in a morning of unsurpassed pleasure
'What do you think you're doing?'
screams the shocked voice of my daughter
I leap up, guilty of being caught
my hand is still in the middle
of achieving a climactic outcome
'Get your hands off it right now!'
I whimper at her jealous wrath
'I only wanted to know what it feels like'
She snatches her property back from my grasp
'Leave my lovely new laptop alone - or else!'

[hillwalker]

A very clever, playful piece.... what a wicked sense of humour you show here. I had to comment, if only to bump it to the top of the page before it disappeared off everybody else's radar and so we can all share.

[Delta40]

thanks hill. I had to wrestle with her tonight to get near it!

[Jerrybaldy]

Lol Delta. And there was I thinking this was going to be like Watership Down... a tale of a rabbit :)
very funny. needed a laugh and you provided it.
thanks
JB

[Hawkman]

Nice one D40. A cheeky little poem with a nice twist.

Best, H

[Sandi]

lol Love it.