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kittypaws
08-01-2010, 11:34 PM
Time does a lot of things;
It brings us seasons of memories
Of present and past
And life and loves.

It heals and wounds,
And time knows how to stand still.
Often it rushes by
Way to fast before out eyes.

It makes us old,
Yet reminds us of our youth.
Time is more then a word
It is its own entity
Its own death and birth.

Time means very little to one
Unless it is within the fleeting
Moments of life.
Hold it close as you never know
When it will disappear
Right before your eyes.


Kittypaws

Hawkman
08-02-2010, 10:04 AM
I like this a lot. nice sentiments expressed well and a good read generally. Nice poem kitty, but check S2 for typos :D

Thanks for sharing. H

Jerrybaldy
08-02-2010, 04:06 PM
[QUOTE=kittypaws;932132]
It makes us old,
Yet reminds us of our youth.

Time is a mean master. I enjoyed your thoughts Kitty.
JB

kittypaws
08-02-2010, 10:05 PM
Thank you both for looking in on me!

I need to improve and can only do that with guidance....which I have found here at LitNet is given freely. Thank you.

Kitty