Please Don't

[Jerrybaldy]

Please don't
Don't
Please don't leave me
Please dont leave me now
Please
Don't leave me now
Please don't leave me alone to cry
Don't leave me
Leave me
Leave me now
Leave me alone now
Leave me alone now please
Leave me alone now and die.

[PrinceMyshkin]

Heartbreaking - and true to life! Bravo.

[Alexander III]

Have to disagree with Prince, of your works which I have read this is my least favorite, found it dry.

[Jerrybaldy]

Prince- thank you. Think at its heart its a truism.
Third. Thanks for your comment and your honesty.
JB

[Delta40]

ok, ok I am officially a fan of your writing!

[kittypaws]

everyone usually says please....what about thank you for not leaving me?

Changes the whole thing, heh?

Kittypaws

[Haunted]

ah, what anguish. I can listen to this as a song, with the rhythmic line breaks.

[Jerrybaldy]

Delta- you sound brow beaten ;) thank you.
Kitty- thanks for the feline perspective- may you never have fur balls. thanking for not leaving Im still thinking about...
Haunted - I hope you aren't but your name suits your lines. I love your poetry and thanks

[Haunted]

Jerry, you're forever so kind with your comments. I have a one-track mind with 2 themes at best. After a while you'd start to say, no more pleeze. Your stuff, on the other hand, is diversified and full of wonders. I look forward to reading more!