Sheltered love

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I don’t know the minute or the hour
When God decided from his exalted tower
To make us both shelter from that shower
And to make our love bloom like a flower

[tailor STATELY]

I don’t know the minute or the hour
When God decided from his exalted tower
To make us both shelter from that shower
And to make our love bloom like a flower

Enjoyed your poem.

Just one tweek you might consider: And make our love blossom like a flower

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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[angliholic]

I don’t know the minute or the hour
When God decided from his exalted tower
To make us both shelter from that shower
And to make our love bloom like a flower

Precise and concise!
One stitch sees the blood!
No waste of words and thoughts.

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Thank you both