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Biggus
07-27-2010, 04:32 AM
We have no wealth or treasure
Yet we are rich beyond measure
We have our health and welfare
And have loved ones who care
Our riches cannot be spent
Nor can their great value be lent
Against coin they cannot be compared
For our riches can easily be shared
Our riches are our family and friends
Whose infinite value knows no ends
We have no wealth or treasure
Yet we are rich beyond measure

tailor STATELY
07-27-2010, 05:55 AM
Nice sentiment.

You appear to have decided to go lockstep in rhyme. I might ask you to be bold and leave off the 's' in 'ends':
"Whose infinite value knows no end"

or, perhaps choose another line construct more apropos to end with 'ends' there.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle);
tailor STATELY

blazeofglory
07-27-2010, 06:37 AM
Today we are so much driven by the desire of possessing huge money and buying luxuries with it and that is why we have this recession because we live sumptuously with our minds only on material possessions. That is why we have this recession. Let us treasure the values the poet comes up with. These are prophetic statements in this time of depression

angliholic
07-27-2010, 06:46 AM
We have no wealth or treasure
Yet we are rich beyond measure
We have our health and welfare
And have loved ones who care
Our riches cannot be spent
Nor can their great value be lent
Against coin they cannot be compared
For our riches can easily be shared
Our riches are our family and friends
Whose infinite value knows no ends
We have no wealth or treasure
Yet we are rich beyond measure

Amen to that!
I see eye to eye with you that our family, loved ones, and friends are the most priceless jewels on earth!

adityasam
07-27-2010, 06:53 AM
WOW, At first I thought riches was the money you were talking about. Well said, friends and family are more than riches. Great Poem!

Biggus
07-27-2010, 08:27 AM
Thank you all very much

Paul

hack
07-27-2010, 12:04 PM
Thanks Big, true that.

Biggus
07-28-2010, 03:49 AM
Thanks Hack