A Poem's Woes

[adityasam]

They write me when they emote
And I have to share their feelings
Sometimes, it's very tough to bear
But I Never Complain
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People conveyed stories through me
And entertained children and men
Sometimes, they find me boring
But I Never Complain
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Like Wordsworth said
I am born spontaneously
Made with powerful feelings
Yes, It's difficult to bear
But I Never Complain
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[hillwalker]

A clever idea - a poem written by a poem.....

just a couple of tiny points -

the word 'bear' appears in v1 l2 and again in l3
(perhaps you could use the word 'share' in l2 instead)

and

v2 l2 - 'entertained children and me' (why 'and'? - 'with' me makes more sense)

otherwise, a good effort

H

[adityasam]

Yea i will change that bear to share. Anyway that should have been men instead of me. Typo. Thanks for reading and appreciating my thoughts!

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[blazeofglory]

This is a simple yet gripping expression and you have proved your skills of writing poetry. This is the soul of the poem, you could easily arrest.

[adityasam]

Thanks a lot blaze. I have written many poems waiting to be published (here).

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