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Lamar Cole
07-23-2010, 01:19 AM
Darling, remember the day.
You felt so sad and blue.
All you wanted in the world.
Was for me to just hold you.

I spent all of that day.
Loving you and kissing your tears away.
So whenever you're feeling sad and blue.
No matter what time of day.

I'll be there for you darling.
To kiss your tears away.

tailor STATELY
07-23-2010, 01:36 AM
(sniff)... beautiful.

Jerrybaldy
07-23-2010, 07:03 PM
needs more depth. Reads like a hallmark card. A good one. but needs your bloodstain and body stain over the words to make it personal
BW
JB