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Lamar Cole
07-22-2010, 02:16 AM
My love and I strolled outside.
In the flower garden.
Beautiful and scenic.

It was cloudy in the sky above.
It began to shower raindrops of love.
You and I darling become drenched.
Wet with droplets from above.

Love raindrops look good on your face.
From your lips they gave a sweet taste.
In your hair thay smelled so sweet.
Soft rain and you darling.
Heaven's special treat.

tailor STATELY
07-22-2010, 03:08 AM
A sweet intimate point in time devoid of acid rain; a true blessing.

Are the . punctuations a devise you normally use ?
or are they a device pertinent to your piece ?
or neither/both ?

Bar22do
07-22-2010, 07:25 AM
My love and I strolled outside.
In the flower garden.
Beautiful and scenic.

It was cloudy in the sky above.
It began to shower raindrops of love.
You and I darling become drenched.
Wet with droplets from above.

Love raindrops look good on your face.
From your lips they gave a sweet taste.
In your hair thay smelled so sweet.
Soft rain and you darling.
Heaven's special treat.

essential life! unattainable! still nice to read! best wishes - bar

angliholic
07-22-2010, 09:41 AM
My love and I strolled outside.
In the flower garden.
Beautiful and scenic.

It was cloudy in the sky above.
It began to shower raindrops of love.
You and I darling become drenched.
Wet with droplets from above.

Love raindrops look good on your face.
From your lips they gave a sweet taste.
In your hair thay smelled so sweet.
Soft rain and you darling.
Heaven's special treat.

What a romantic scene!

Raindrops of love, flowers, darling, lovers, cherry lips with droplets.

Those images of love are very vivid!

Nice love song!

Pensive
07-22-2010, 12:30 PM
Love how you give out the feelings so precisely. :)