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adityasam
07-21-2010, 03:00 PM
http://i488.photobucket.com/albums/rr246/adityasam/gangacopy.png
From the Mountains to the Sea
Everybody enjoys it when they see
But still the joy is pathetic
Because it is not authentic
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A man comes and dies
His life filled with sorrows and lies
But with my flow, I capture
Beautifying God's own nature
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Never did i hinder
Come to me and i will be a helper
Clean your soul with my holy shower
It's me, The Mighty River
- An ode to the great River Ganga in India.
NikolaiI
07-21-2010, 03:30 PM
Very beautiful; thanks so much for sharing it with us.
Hope to see more of your poetry in the future!
Delta40
07-21-2010, 08:07 PM
glorious feeling and a picture to accent the mighty flow of your hand!
adityasam
07-22-2010, 01:37 AM
Thanks a lot NikholaiI and Delta40. Youv'e raised my morale and now thinking of joining the poetry contest.
Thnaks again!
:party:
angliholic
07-22-2010, 01:58 AM
http://i488.photobucket.com/albums/rr246/adityasam/ganga-view-rishikeshcopy.png
From the Mountains to the Sea
Everybody enjoys it when they see
But still the joy is pathetic
Because it is not authentic
________________________________
A man comes and dies
His life filled with sorrows and lies
But with my flow, I capture
Beautifying God's own nature
________________________________
Never did i hinder
Come to me and i will be a helper
Clean your soul with my holy shower
It's me, The Mighty River
- An ode to the great River Ganga in India.
:smilewinkgrin:
A soul cleansing river
Indeed it is!
Wash all the sorrows and lies
Of all mankind.
A best handy man
Of the Maker, in fact.
tailor STATELY
07-22-2010, 04:44 AM
Looks like the rivers of home here in Gold country... beautiful.
I particularly enjoyed the last stanza.
Thank you for sharing.
adityasam
07-22-2010, 05:26 AM
Thanks again angliholic and even your words are beautiful to read.
Thank you tailor!
GEETASHREE
07-22-2010, 11:36 AM
Very nice indeed. Keep writing such beautiful poetry. Good Luck
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