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angliholic
07-21-2010, 01:03 PM
To a Weeping Willow


You love to dance
alone
in the breeze
with hair so tender and
long
swaying around your slender figure
gently
as well as
elegantly.

The weeping song
you keep singing
never fails to strike a chord
deep inside
me.
Nevertheless
who cares
to
listen
but
me
?

qimissung
07-21-2010, 03:26 PM
Tender, and thoughtful...

adityasam
07-21-2010, 03:29 PM
Very Nice. I found it comforting, when I imagined myself in that place.

hillwalker
07-21-2010, 06:07 PM
A neat use of metaphor, and a very simple yet effective setting of a peaceful scene.

Jerrybaldy
07-21-2010, 07:23 PM
I hope she appreciates you listening. Enjoyed.
BW
JB

angliholic
07-21-2010, 08:54 PM
Tender, and thoughtful...

Thanks, qimissung, for the feedback.

Peaceful, tender, and caring,

That's the state of my heart.



Very Nice. I found it comforting, when I imagined myself in that place.

Thanks, adityasam.

Comforting and soothing power

To cure a lonesome weary heart,

Nature has them all.

Isn't it worthwhile

To have a crush on Nature?


A neat use of metaphor, and a very simple yet effective setting of a peaceful scene.

Thanks, hillwalker, for the nice words.

A simpleton

I am.

And simple is my surname,

So it's always in my blood.





I hope she appreciates you listening. Enjoyed.
BW
JB

Thanks, Jerry, for the comment.

I hope we can appreciate her charms

All together one day.