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formality hater
07-19-2010, 11:08 AM
Look inside
It's in my veins,
Deep down,
Beneath my skin,
Pushing hard,
To make its way,
Burning me,
On its way
Stabbing me,
With its filthy stride
Crashing up,
My joys, my desires
Obscuring me,
Like some dark liquid,
You see,
What you have done,
Your lie,
Is living inside me,
Injuring me,
Fulfilling your purpose viciously!

Jerrybaldy
07-19-2010, 04:57 PM
A tale of festering betrayal. How we let eachother down.
Good bile :)
cheers
JB

formality hater
07-20-2010, 03:25 AM
Thanks JB.

Delta40
07-20-2010, 05:58 AM
aaah, the pain the pain. you write this so eloquently!

formality hater
07-20-2010, 04:02 PM
Thankyou Delta40!

NikolaiI
07-20-2010, 04:12 PM
I agree with them, this is a great poem! :)

formality hater
07-20-2010, 04:29 PM
Thanks Nikolail.:)

Bar22do
07-20-2010, 04:55 PM
It's plaintive like some of David's Psalms when he cries before the Creator!

But her/his lie is not worth it the N's well being! Let the N cheer up! His/her light will attract a trustworthy one into his/her life!

Best regards - Bar

formality hater
07-22-2010, 02:11 PM
Thanks Bar22do for your comment.:)