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TheEarthIsRound
07-17-2010, 09:49 PM
They were

Taking the Vineyard’s
To the Vineyard.

The Vineyard whose name
A fantasy of time

Shall remain
Martha’s.
They let their children be,

For the moment
His lips touch hers

Stays an eternity
His eyes into hers

The persevere against Time

Though the smile
Their faces

Thus wrinkle

tailor STATELY
07-18-2010, 12:55 AM
Dali-esque... I like it.

One thought: "They persevere against Time"


Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

Bar22do
07-18-2010, 02:32 AM
nothing really perishes, everything revolves, wrinkled only under too heavy a sun, soon smoothed by blessed rain and freshness, eternally leaving skin and wearing one new again... thanks for this sharing... Bar

Hawkman
07-18-2010, 05:19 AM
Very nice. H

TheEarthIsRound
07-21-2010, 12:19 AM
Dali-esque... I like it.

One thought: "They persevere against Time"


Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

I supposedly meant perseverance but I didn't like how that sound... =DD

Thank you for liking it!


Bar and Hawkman: thank you both for the comments!


Best,