A Single Tear

[Lamar Cole]

I remember the time we said goodbye.
A single tear fell from your eye.
My love was going away.
On a distant trip today.

Her nearness she knew I would surely miss.
Upon my head she placed a kiss.
Even though she left today.
Her heart never did go away.

Upon a TWA jet she flew.
Up in the sky so blue.
A love so true.
I could still feel her kiss as the wind blew.

[tailor STATELY]

I enjoyed the first two stanzas. The third I would suggest a rework or left off entirely.

Thank you for sharing,
tailor STATELY

[Jerrybaldy]

Would guess this is personal and a memory. If so nothing should be left out.
cheers
JB

[Delta40]

I like the idea of that single tear being swept away in the wind.