Love amongst the stars

[Biggus]

When you give your heart to another
You bathe in the warmth of the sun
You walk tall upon the earth
Tall enough to touch the stars
You make love beneath the moon
And Venus guides your path
As you navigate the Milky Way
But when you are cast aside
You crash back down to earth
And inhabit planet Solitude

[Jerrybaldy]

Love found love lost Biggus. Four words for a lifetime of being ****ed up by the end result. Well captured. JB

[Biggus]

Very well put
Thank you

[tailor STATELY]

Well done. I expected a ribald entry for some reason and was treated to a gem.

I liked lines 1-7 and would have preferred an 8-14, or so, for the flip side of the coin;
ie: I wanted more.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

[NikolaiI]

Beautiful, simple, deeply felt and portrayed, accessible.

It all fits very nicely. :smile5:

[Biggus]

Thanks NicholaiI

[Biggus]

Thanks Tailor